Call of Duty song

Thu 11 Jul 2013 - 5:21

Tryna change shit up and show off my lyrical side a bit and chose to do it on a random topic lol. Give some feedback?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YuRnl7-5xUM

Fri 12 Jul 2013 - 8:31

I don't really play video games, so this doesn't appeal too me, but there is for sure a market for songs like this.
As far as lyricism, it was pretty good, I enjoyed some of the references - one of my mates has family in the Mongrel Mob.
Flow was on point.
I really liked the way it was mixed as well.

Fri 12 Jul 2013 - 20:12

Perfect Stranger wrote:I don't really play video games

I thought it was just me.

Thank God I'm not the only one.

Sat 13 Jul 2013 - 3:34

You should make a song called "dough" for no reason.. Dizzy

Sat 13 Jul 2013 - 3:49

I was wanting advice on the flow and shit as I've been working on it a bit after taking in feedback from people, not the song topic lol. So any feedback on the flow, lyrics and what not?

Sat 13 Jul 2013 - 3:50

King wrote:You should make a song called "dough" for no reason..

hilarious... haha

Sat 13 Jul 2013 - 4:03

fxtdiilz wrote:

King wrote:You should make a song called "dough" for no reason..

hilarious... haha

No but seriously.

Sat 13 Jul 2013 - 8:00

King wrote:

fxtdiilz wrote:

King wrote:You should make a song called "dough" for no reason..

hilarious... haha

No but seriously.

Haha maybe one day bro just to give you some sort of satisfaction lol

Sat 13 Jul 2013 - 10:16

Well, your flow was 10x better.
Your lyrics were straight to the point which means you pretty much avoided putting too me words in the bar, so that's a positive.
I fuck with this from a delivery stand point rather than conceptual as I said.

Sat 13 Jul 2013 - 17:24

You really need to increase your vocabulary. I can't believe you actually rhymed duty with doody.

Sat 13 Jul 2013 - 17:25

but the flow was a big improvement

Sat 13 Jul 2013 - 20:51

Perfect Stranger wrote:Well, your flow was 10x better.
Your lyrics were straight to the point which means you pretty much avoided putting too me words in the bar, so that's a positive.
I fuck with this from a delivery stand point rather than conceptual as I said.

Sat 13 Jul 2013 - 23:32

semaj116 wrote:You really need to increase your vocabulary. I can't believe you actually rhymed duty with doody.

Um listen to the whole song buddy, there's nothing wrong with the rhyming :)
and the rhyme is "fan of call of duty", "man your full of doody", "and they pull a moody"

Sun 14 Jul 2013 - 1:08

semaj116 wrote:You really need to increase your vocabulary. I can't believe you actually rhymed duty with doody.

I didn't mind the rhyming but I agree.
But that is just part of being an MC.

Sun 14 Jul 2013 - 2:51

fxtdiilz wrote:

semaj116 wrote:You really need to increase your vocabulary. I can't believe you actually rhymed duty with doody.

Um listen to the whole song buddy, there's nothing wrong with the rhyming :)
and the rhyme is "fan of call of duty", "man your full of doody", "and they pull a moody"

jesus christ you beg for feedback and just dismiss it when i give it to you lol

Sun 14 Jul 2013 - 3:06

semaj116 wrote:

fxtdiilz wrote:

semaj116 wrote:You really need to increase your vocabulary. I can't believe you actually rhymed duty with doody.

Um listen to the whole song buddy, there's nothing wrong with the rhyming :)
and the rhyme is "fan of call of duty", "man your full of doody", "and they pull a moody"

jesus christ you beg for feedback and just dismiss it when i give it to you lol

well you thought the rhyme was duty and doody, I corrected you and showed you it was a half a sentence rhyme not just last words

Sun 14 Jul 2013 - 3:42

fxtdiilz wrote:

semaj116 wrote:

fxtdiilz wrote:

semaj116 wrote:You really need to increase your vocabulary. I can't believe you actually rhymed duty with doody.

Um listen to the whole song buddy, there's nothing wrong with the rhyming :)
and the rhyme is "fan of call of duty", "man your full of doody", "and they pull a moody"

jesus christ you beg for feedback and just dismiss it when i give it to you lol

well you thought the rhyme was duty and doody, I corrected you and showed you it was a half a sentence rhyme not just last words

Oh yeah no I got that much, I was just saying that you could have thought of a much better rhyme than "doody", it comes off underdeveloped and kinda cringe-y.

Tue 23 Jul 2013 - 2:49

I play call of duty sometimes,although until December 25 2013 only COD games I can play online is modern warfare,
I didn't like the song,sorry.

Tue 23 Jul 2013 - 2:54

You could flow

and i would like it more if you had a pure american accent

Tue 23 Jul 2013 - 5:04

Essence wrote:and i would like it more if you had a pure american accent

this tbh

Tue 23 Jul 2013 - 5:18

Essence wrote:and i would like it more if you had a pure american accent

Call of Duty song With_it_deal_with_it-27446

Tue 23 Jul 2013 - 5:46

stepppppin the game upppp

Sat 27 Jul 2013 - 4:11

AlwaysRaw wrote:

Essence wrote:and i would like it more if you had a pure american accent

this tbh

and I would like all American rappers to have a NZ accent, but that would be stupid wouldn't it?

Sat 27 Jul 2013 - 13:14

what would you consider Scribe's accent dilz? He's from NZ but i can't fucking tell if it's NZ or American. Is he putting that shit on?

Sat 27 Jul 2013 - 13:41

semaj116 wrote:what would you consider Scribe's accent dilz? He's from NZ but i can't fucking tell if it's NZ or American. Is he putting that shit on?

More of an NZ accent over anything but just has a bit of a higher voice than most of us lol, but definitely NZ

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