New Song

Check it out and leave feedback and such! Also you can download it, if wanted.




The instrumental pretty much makes the song, its spectacular. And I just realized I didn't put the producer's info anywhere yet. If anyone is interested it was done by a guy named Skip Sanders and can be downloaded here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LimviE_95m8

Thanks for checking it out!

I like this. Well done. The only feedback I'd have is to work on your rhyme schemes but other than that this isn't bad at all.

Agree with Jeet about the rhyme scheme but dude this surprised me hah, the beat is a good choice too.

It was a good listen. Even if the rhyme scheme was aight. It was still pretty good nonetheless.

I appreciate the feedback! My rhyme schemes are definitely something I need to work on. I really hadn't noticed it somehow until you guys mentioned it, thank you.

I like your voice, and yes the schemes could use work but your rhymes have improved heaps in to the other stuff I've heard.

Perfect Stranger wrote:I like your voice, and yes the schemes could use work but your rhymes have improved heaps in to the other stuff I've heard.

Thanks! Glad to hear there is some improvement, in the end I decided to just upload it without going through and trying to "fix" the song. It just doesn't turn out well whenever I do that. So the original post now has a YouTube link.