Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)

Thanks Buddie, I appreciate you taking your time to listen to a few! Thank you for the feedback... I'm going to share it amongst the group and work on improving as I agree with what you said about forcing things.

Reidy wrote:Thanks Buddie, I appreciate you taking your time to listen to a few! Thank you for the feedback... I'm going to share it amongst the group and work on improving as I agree with what you said about forcing things.

No problem man!

AlwaysRaw wrote:

Perfect Stranger wrote:

Buddie wrote:

AlwaysRaw wrote:

Perfect Stranger wrote:

AlwaysRaw wrote:

Perfect Stranger wrote:Well, I've been detracted a lot today, so another won't make a difference, but this is a recent track of mine.

THE ONE PERSON TO SUBMIT and doesn't get reviewed by Buddie

Yeah, what he said.
Wut u mn da 1 pearson tah submut m8?

I mean you're the only one who put in a vid for Buddie to review or whatever.

Sorry man! I didn't see this until now for some reason lol

You need A LOT more practice pal! I would really focus on improving your flow. It's hard to really judge you and your music from a minute and half video. But from that verse alone, it wasn't very good man. I'm just being honest.

Rapping takes years and years to truly perfect your craft, but if you're willing to put in the work then who knows, you could improve and become a good rapper. Your also young, so there's a lot of time for improvement.

Rating: 3/10

First off, thank you for you honesty!
Although, I think you were being a little harsh - as I thought my lyrics were decent - but I agree with your points on my flow.
This is something I'm trying my hardest to fix up.
This was written very quickly and memorised very quickly.
If you compare my lyricism two years ago too now, you'd be suprised, but hopefully my flow will prosper in the future.
Cheers.

Wow. Way to take it like a champ man. I feel like Buddie on this but it's because I'm not used to an accent

Is that sarcasm?
It's ironic because the people where I live, people always give me really positive feedback.
Like I've been on the ABC and run quite a few comps, but I understand you wouldn't really be familar with accents such as mine.

Check out my TeamBackPack entry bruuuuh!

Perfect Stranger wrote:

AlwaysRaw wrote:

Perfect Stranger wrote:

Buddie wrote:

AlwaysRaw wrote:

Perfect Stranger wrote:

AlwaysRaw wrote:

Perfect Stranger wrote:Well, I've been detracted a lot today, so another won't make a difference, but this is a recent track of mine.

THE ONE PERSON TO SUBMIT and doesn't get reviewed by Buddie

Yeah, what he said.
Wut u mn da 1 pearson tah submut m8?

I mean you're the only one who put in a vid for Buddie to review or whatever.

Sorry man! I didn't see this until now for some reason lol

You need A LOT more practice pal! I would really focus on improving your flow. It's hard to really judge you and your music from a minute and half video. But from that verse alone, it wasn't very good man. I'm just being honest.

Rapping takes years and years to truly perfect your craft, but if you're willing to put in the work then who knows, you could improve and become a good rapper. Your also young, so there's a lot of time for improvement.

Rating: 3/10

First off, thank you for you honesty!
Although, I think you were being a little harsh - as I thought my lyrics were decent - but I agree with your points on my flow.
This is something I'm trying my hardest to fix up.
This was written very quickly and memorised very quickly.
If you compare my lyricism two years ago too now, you'd be suprised, but hopefully my flow will prosper in the future.
Cheers.

Wow. Way to take it like a champ man. I feel like Buddie on this but it's because I'm not used to an accent

Is that sarcasm?
It's ironic because the people where I live, people always give me really positive feedback.
Like I've been on the ABC and run quite a few comps, but I understand you wouldn't really be familar with accents such as mine.

No man, I think it's good you didn't freak out when Buddie gave you constructive critisism.

Well hey there, I only do this purely for fun so don't expect a masterpiece but I think I've gotten fairly decent. I only have two tracks on this page but I don't really expect you to check them both out, if you like what you hear go ahead. Big Spender is on some fast ignant shit and then King is an old verse on a beat I found online. Sorry about the quality, recorded on a shitty headset and right now I'm focusing on flow/lyricism over sound quality

https://soundcloud.com/renin95

Uploaded another thing if you get the chance ;) https://soundcloud.com/renin95/in-charge

Buddie get in here

semaj116 wrote:Uploaded another thing if you get the chance ;) https://soundcloud.com/renin95/in-charge

I listened to "In Charge" and to be honest it wasn't that bad. The mic quality is pretty bad. I would suggest buying a Samson CO1U, it's a great mic for the price and it's not very expensive at all.

As far as your rapping goes, I was feeling your flow. Your lyrics were also decent but they could use some work. I think the main thing you could improve on is your breath control and your pronunciation of words. When you were spitting that verse, sometimes I couldn't even understand what you were saying. Not bad though man, you sound pretty young so you have plenty of time for improvement

Overall Grade: 6.5/10

Buddie wrote:

semaj116 wrote:Uploaded another thing if you get the chance ;) https://soundcloud.com/renin95/in-charge

I listened to "In Charge" and to be honest it wasn't that bad. The mic quality is pretty bad. I would suggest buying a Samson CO1U, it's a great mic for the price and it's not very expensive at all.

As far as your rapping goes, I was feeling your flow. Your lyrics were also decent but they could use some work. I think the main thing you could improve on is your breath control and your pronunciation of words. When you were spitting that verse, sometimes I couldn't even understand what you were saying. Not bad though man, you sound pretty young so you have plenty of time for improvement

Overall Grade: 6.5/10

Many thanks good sir, I'm definitely aware of breath control and pronunciation and have been working on those for the past couple weeks, appreciate it! I'll look into the mic

Also yeah, 17

Just uploaded a new (pretty short) song a few hours ago. May as well just post it up here, rather than make a new thread.
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dukeblue wrote:Just uploaded a new (pretty short) song a few hours ago. May as well just post it up here, rather than make a new thread.
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Sounds listenable dude. Like it's real nice! Good work on this

dukeblue wrote:Just uploaded a new (pretty short) song a few hours ago. May as well just post it up here, rather than make a new thread.
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Not bad man, I think that you really need to work on your lyrics and the way that you fit words into each bar. A lot of the words sound forced, especially in the beginning when you said the word "horizon." Your flow could use some touching up as well for sure, but I think you should try to improve on your lyrics and make sure that all of the words flow with the beat of the song. Not bad though man, not bad at all. Thanks for posting!

Overall Grade: 6/10

Buddie wrote:

dukeblue wrote:Just uploaded a new (pretty short) song a few hours ago. May as well just post it up here, rather than make a new thread.
Can't embed for some reason.

Not bad man, I think that you really need to work on your lyrics and the way that you fit words into each bar. A lot of the words sound forced, especially in the beginning when you said the word "horizon." Your flow could use some touching up as well for sure, but I think you should try to improve on your lyrics and make sure that all of the words flow with the beat of the song. Not bad though man, not bad at all. Thanks for posting!

Overall Grade: 6/10

Thanks for the feedback! You too AlwaysRaw! But I completely agree with what you're saying Buddie. I have had a major case of writers block for the past few months, and this was the best I've came up with recently. Hopefully I can keep these things in mind whenever I'm writing/recording new music. Especially how forced this song sounds at times. I really didn't notice it all that much until reading your feedback and listening again.

dukeblue wrote:

Buddie wrote:

dukeblue wrote:Just uploaded a new (pretty short) song a few hours ago. May as well just post it up here, rather than make a new thread.
Can't embed for some reason.

Not bad man, I think that you really need to work on your lyrics and the way that you fit words into each bar. A lot of the words sound forced, especially in the beginning when you said the word "horizon." Your flow could use some touching up as well for sure, but I think you should try to improve on your lyrics and make sure that all of the words flow with the beat of the song. Not bad though man, not bad at all. Thanks for posting!

Overall Grade: 6/10

Thanks for the feedback! You too AlwaysRaw! But I completely agree with what you're saying Buddie. I have had a major case of writers block for the past few months, and this was the best I've came up with recently. Hopefully I can keep these things in mind whenever I'm writing/recording new music. Especially how forced this song sounds at times. I really didn't notice it all that much until reading your feedback and listening again.

No problem man! Practice makes perfect!

feel free to check out my new project

Katz Inf Gang wrote:feel free to check out my new project

Not bad man, I was feeling a couple of tracks. I'm not sure how old you are, but if you're relatively young then I see some potential in you as an artist. One of the main things you could work on is your delivery. In the song "Hurt" I think that the listener would be able to feel more of what you are saying if you just had a more emotional/powerful delivery. I felt the same way in a couple of your other songs too. As far as your flow goes, it's decent but could use some work. The lyrics in your songs are probably what you do best. They are pretty solid, however they could use some work as well. Good luck with your future projects and keep practicing!

Overall Grade: 7/10

could you check out my new song bro?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lJwNxeT-hao

fxtdiilz wrote:could you check out my new song bro?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lJwNxeT-hao

nice beat

fxtdiilz wrote:could you check out my new song bro?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lJwNxeT-hao

I didn't like the hook. But the track was pretty damn good.

Emblem wrote:

fxtdiilz wrote:could you check out my new song bro?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lJwNxeT-hao

I didn't like the hook. But the track was pretty damn good.

Thanks bro, when i released my first song you were saying you dont "feel me" lol. but thanks for the feedback

AlwaysRaw wrote:

fxtdiilz wrote:could you check out my new song bro?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lJwNxeT-hao

nice beat

thanks lol, any feedback on the song itself?

Hey, could you please critique my flow and lyrics?
It's highly inspired by Hopsin, and there's a line that might be too close to one of Hopsin's lines but I'll change it eventually. Thanks

https://soundcloud.com/aabrant/preview-untitled-song-that

fxtdiilz wrote:

Emblem wrote:

fxtdiilz wrote:could you check out my new song bro?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lJwNxeT-hao

I didn't like the hook. But the track was pretty damn good.

Thanks bro, when i released my first song you were saying you dont "feel me" lol. but thanks for the feedback

Oh ya. This is better.