- fxtdiilzRegistered Member
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Virtue - New song
Wed 31 Jul 2013 - 7:18
Let me know your thoughts? I honestly think it has a bit of a stoner vibe to it lol
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g6EqPPnLeg0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g6EqPPnLeg0
Re: Virtue - New song
Wed 31 Jul 2013 - 21:19
shit sounds dope man. You are stepping up your rhyme schemes a lot. The only opinion I have is to try and put a little more heart behind when you are spitting. That's probably one of the biggest things I think everyone should work on so it doesn't sound so cookie cutter if that makes sense.
- Perfect StrangerRegistered Member
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Location : Fucking Narnia
Re: Virtue - New song
Thu 1 Aug 2013 - 9:34
dcan wrote:shit sounds dope man. You are stepping up your rhyme schemes a lot. The only opinion I have is to try and put a little more heart behind when you are spitting. That's probably one of the biggest things I think everyone should work on so it doesn't sound so cookie cutter if that makes sense.
This.
As I've said your lyricism is improving but I'd like too see you expand more vocally, delivery wise at least.
I like most of Eedee's stuff but I didn't fuck with the hook.
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