I´d really appreciate some feedback on my new rap song. Thanks a lot.

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Read the rules. Thanks.

Please don't just come to the forums just to advertise especially when you have 1 post.
thank you

This should be blocked. You only have 1 post. You need 100 to start posting in this section.

Watch jokerr's video on how to fix your vocals or get a better mic, cuz I cant understand shit that its annoying.

.....first line kinda seems like Ill Mind of Hopsin.
I like your song "I'm the new eminem".....

The musics bad and you should feel bad.
jk jk, but seriously don't post in this part of the forum

Your production value is so terrible I didn't even feel like sticking around long enough to hear you spit. You should work on that.