Feedback on a freestyle-ish thing?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cXciw73ji2I

I don't wanna consider it a freestyle because I wrote most of it, but anyways, check it out and leave me some feedback. I'd really appreciate it. Also, my mixtape is dropping on the 12th!

Looks like you just record yourself spitting one line at a time

Jake The Dog wrote:Looks like you just record yourself spitting one line at a time

Nah I recorded the whole track in 2 takes. i just didn't want to do the video for it with the same angle all the time. I thought it'd get boring haha.

Okay, haha. I thought it was pretty good. Like you're not on some next level shit, but if you had a mixtape out I'd check it out and prolly like it.

Jake The Dog wrote:Okay, haha. I thought it was pretty good. Like you're not on some next level shit, but if you had a mixtape out I'd check it out and prolly like it.

Yeah, I'm pretty much just starting out at this point. I'm sure I'll get better with time. Thanks for the positive words!