- PapaGregRegistered Member
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One of my first songs, looking for critique
Wed 19 Oct 2011 - 6:19
Hey guys. So I'm pretty new to this but I recently developed an interest in rapping. I wrote this song after going through some shit with a girl I was recently involved with.
If you wouldn't mind, I would like you to listen to the whole thing and give me an honest critique. Try to excuse my bad singing with the hook. Any feedback is appreciated, thanks!
http://soundcloud.com/gregdesciscio/beautiful/s-hllX4
If you wouldn't mind, I would like you to listen to the whole thing and give me an honest critique. Try to excuse my bad singing with the hook. Any feedback is appreciated, thanks!
http://soundcloud.com/gregdesciscio/beautiful/s-hllX4
- TreDopeRegistered Member
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Re: One of my first songs, looking for critique
Wed 19 Oct 2011 - 6:25
I'm feelin this already! The quality is iffy! it pops every now and then.. not a problem to hear lyrics except the first few bars. Flow was off at a few points.. this is good work for one of your first songs though! No doubt.. I'm feelin this though DEFINITELY! :) Me like myself, haven't been recording long.. i'm still developing the swag on the mic.. but it comes to all that have the passion!
If you have a few minutes of your time! Would you Peep a track of mine I just put out.. It's a collab with my brother. I'd just like some honest feedback! Not asking for views at all! I want to better myself as an artist.. and I need some advice if any! But if not, then it's still cool! Keep up the Good work bro!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YV7J3gUl63g
If you have a few minutes of your time! Would you Peep a track of mine I just put out.. It's a collab with my brother. I'd just like some honest feedback! Not asking for views at all! I want to better myself as an artist.. and I need some advice if any! But if not, then it's still cool! Keep up the Good work bro!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YV7J3gUl63g
- PapaGregRegistered Member
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Re: One of my first songs, looking for critique
Wed 19 Oct 2011 - 6:30
Thanks man. Yeah I recorded it on some shitty mic. I plan on doing a re-recording now that I've become a little familiar with mixing and mastering in FL Studio.
I gave your track a listen, sounds pretty good. Not a huge fan of Bruno Mars but you ride the beat pretty nice so it works. Keep up the good work!
I gave your track a listen, sounds pretty good. Not a huge fan of Bruno Mars but you ride the beat pretty nice so it works. Keep up the good work!
- TreDopeRegistered Member
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Re: One of my first songs, looking for critique
Wed 19 Oct 2011 - 6:33
FL really isn't the program for recording.. it can be if you know it! But if you google Cool Edit Pro, Mixcraft, umm, or mixiing programs.. you can find a cracked program of one of those proper software editions. They're a lot simpler and easier to work with than FL. But thanks for your ears bro! Good Look :)
- PapaGregRegistered Member
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Re: One of my first songs, looking for critique
Wed 19 Oct 2011 - 6:38
Well I use Audacity for recording, but I bring everything into FL for all the touch-up work. And no problem, if you need a second opinion on any of your other shit you know where to find me.
- TreDopeRegistered Member
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Re: One of my first songs, looking for critique
Wed 19 Oct 2011 - 6:41
swag swag.. I fucks with it. and Preciate that my dude! You got any questions, same goes for me! Hmu.. I'll be uploading actual videos.. and Original songs Asap! Workingon them now!
Re: One of my first songs, looking for critique
Wed 19 Oct 2011 - 7:26
damn that was actually pretty good! For one of your first tracks, i can vibe with it. I'm liking the verses, the hooks are alright but could use some work.
i like where you went with your lyrics. bravo
I agree with tredope though, try cool edit its a good program.
i like where you went with your lyrics. bravo
I agree with tredope though, try cool edit its a good program.
- BoomBotzRegistered Member
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Re: One of my first songs, looking for critique
Wed 19 Oct 2011 - 7:32
its hard to find a download for cool edit. i have it and use it but forgot how i got it. but if you can find a way to get it i recommend it. Best program out there to be honest.
- PapaGregRegistered Member
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Re: One of my first songs, looking for critique
Wed 19 Oct 2011 - 7:35
Thanks bishop, i appreciate the feedback. And yeah, cool edit is now Adobe Audition. It seems all older versions of the program are discontinued and no longer supported
Re: One of my first songs, looking for critique
Wed 19 Oct 2011 - 7:39
Try piratebay lool
i know a friend that got it there
i know a friend that got it there
- PapaGregRegistered Member
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Re: One of my first songs, looking for critique
Wed 19 Oct 2011 - 15:28
Thanks, I'll play around with it and see how I like it
- Chicka Chicka Mr DaveyRegistered Member
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Re: One of my first songs, looking for critique
Wed 19 Oct 2011 - 15:47
its good dude just gota deliver your you lyric's witha bit of Swag blend the vocals and music together your voice is over powering to tha beat
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