Anyone wanna hear my first song ever?

This is from circa Summer 2008, and my rap name used to be Magnum.

I go first, and the second verse is my cousin, KG. I know, I used to suck, bad. Lmfao.

http://hulkshare.com/26grmsdhxoqv

Magnum? LMFAO! I guess you gotta start somewhere.

ClapYo! wrote:Magnum? LMFAO! I guess you gotta start somewhere.

WORD, lol.

Yeah, I don't know what the fuck I was thinking. I had been watching Magnum P.I. one day after about 2 blunts and decided that would be my rap name. Lmfao

LMFAO! magnum p.i.....

funny stuff. do you have much more of your earlier work?

Here's another one, done over Nas's "Surviving The Times" , with my cousin on the hook: http://hulkshare.com/n5mewomnfim0

that one was aight, tbh. better than the first you posted.

Dat MC wrote:that one was aight, tbh. better than the first you posted.

Agreed!

I have so many songs from back in the day, lmao. I just stumbled across them in my iTunes. But soon after these songs were made, I changed my name to Ralph Lauren, which is even worse than Magnum, smh.

Here's a Freestyle to "Feelin It": http://hulkshare.com/s17hq716hp5m

LMFAOO! Checking that freestyle now.

A little constructive criticism...Speed it up a little (Not too much) and go rap louder. It sounds kinda lazy/slow. But thats good for a first ever rapped verse man.

Uhhh, ok lol :O

Sry didn't mean for that to sound like I was telling you how to rap lol...It was just my opinion on what I would do....my bad lol....keep at it man!

Word Gangus. This is great work for your first time imo.

That's not how I rap anymore O_O That freestyle over Feelin It is old as dirt.

Yeah I would agree with Gangus, it's lacking emotion which makes it come off as a bit lazy. But obviously everybody has to find their groove so it's pretty good for your first track. I liked the freestyle to feelin' it. If you have a couple minutes check out my posts on the main page and lemme know what you think. Keep up the good work!