Verse I wrote

Not a forum for text drops? wow. kewl

changed my life.

Wow thanks for serious feedback ...

you remind me of the dudes that comment on beat videos on youtube.

AlwaysRaw wrote:changed my life.

u make more tings like that i'll buy!

Spanky wrote:

AlwaysRaw wrote:changed my life.

u make more tings like that i'll buy!

lol I read that in Hop's voice.

are you dropping a mixtape or something dude? you spit hot flames!

This is so fuckin ill, changed my entire perspective on the world.

Thank you sir for being an inspirational leader to the masses.

AlwaysRaw wrote:are you dropping a mixtape or something dude? you spit hot flames!

I sure hope so! I want an ultra mega deluxe signed edition!

3582 wrote:This is so fuckin ill, changed my entire perspective on the world.

Thank you sir for being an inspirational leader to the masses.

THIS THIS THIS.
I'm definitely one who enjoys life but after reading this I thought about killing myself because I knew I'd never amount to his level of incredibility.

read first line

i hope u dont do internal rhyiming like that in almost every song

so deep
wow

lol you guys are literally the biggest faggots i have come across on a rap forum

I'll body any of you dumb fucks.

Smh it's an internet thug. You're probably a soft mothafucka in real life.

HopsinIsBooty wrote:lol you guys are literally the biggest faggots i have come across on a rap forum

I'll body any of you dumb fucks.

You have no style fgt. You sound like every other yt rapper that tries too hard to rhyme. Your lyricism is shit too. "I feel broken like im on stage at a broadway play"? wtf kinda shit is that?

HopsinIsBooty wrote:lol you guys are literally the biggest faggots i have come across on a rap forum

I'll body any of you dumb fucks.

o rly? body this then...
I'm the lyrical individual spitting
Leaving conditions in critical ripping
It into you sicker than criminals licking
Subliminal shots at pitiful cops
Fearing you not
Seeing that your miracles stop
Analyctical critics ridicule the lyrical spittage
Survival of the fittest, rhyming with the mind of a chemist
Providing the lyrics inscriving the vision
In my book of creations racing to satisfy impatient sensation
Oasis of thought facing the face of God
Tracing my heart to its place and its basis of start
It's basically dark with no light
If you're going to fight, then hold mics
Something I should've have known my whole life
I didn't 'till that one day he spotted me spitting
Told him: '' It was a freestyle'', he said: '' You gotta be kidding.''
He said: '' Something that sick just gotta be written.''
But it wasn't, I wasn't fronting, something's obviously different
About Passion spazzing, steadily rapping
Ready for action, no matter if a felony happens

I'm focused, ferocious, incredibly so sick
Making syllables stretch across the track like aerobics
You know this, I'm what makes a lyricist go spit
Even when people around consider him hopeless
I'm the dopest spokesman, the quotes is potent
The giant freestyling Poseidon enthroned the ocean
Made of words so absurd, adressing the lesson learned
Arresting the best of words, investing the blessings earned
Impressing the heaven terms, surpressing the devils burn
Caressing my weapons firm, contesting the best you've heard
I'd rather fight to the top than hand over rocks
So Whizz having me write on the spot was like Pandora's Box
Being unlocked and shattered, rocked and battered
Subconscious madness, I really couldn't stop the habit
Shocked the masses and dropped the average
Spitting and getting niggas addicted like rock fanatics

...faggot

spanky finna renegade

Coolguy 127 wrote:


I know it's Passionate's verse.

Well he said "any" of us on the forums to body him. Passionate is signed to the forums.

edit: i feel lyk u didnt actually know, u just copied n pasted the first 6 lines lmao

Coolguy 127 wrote:

l0l

HopsinIsBooty wrote:

I'll body any of you dumb fucks.

That would be cool.
Just take that verse you wrote and rap it over a beat and post the video on Youtube.