Could I get some feedback on these two verses?

So these will probably be the last things I post before my new mic arrives, thanks to Buddie for the suggestion on that btw but I was hoping I could get some constructive critisism on these tracks. By the way, I'm only doing this for fun/creative outlet and I don't really wanna be a rapper, I just want to be good at rapping haha.

https://soundcloud.com/renin95/mouse-in-the-room that's the first, wrote it and recorded it in the span of two days

https://soundcloud.com/renin95/king-of-the-apathetic and the second. this one i just made up as i went, saying a few lines lines, pausing recording, thinking of something else then kept going so it's a bit strange. I put a second vocal layer beneath it and i actually really like it. I don't expect you to understand everything because the recording quality is so shitty but the lyrics are posted there too. thanks in advance haha

I haven't heard those two, but I'm really digging your "In Charge" song it has a really nice underground feel!

Perfect Stranger wrote:I haven't heard those two, but I'm really digging your "In Charge" song it has a really nice underground feel!

Haha thanks man, if you liked that you'll probably dig mouse in the room, same producer and pretty similar feel. Appreciate the feedback bro.

also, this beat i made https://soundcloud.com/renin95/well-snap-i-made-this-o