Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
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- BuddieRegistered Member
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Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 0:50
Alright guys, post one song of yours that you think is your best track to date and I'll give you my honest opinion on it and give you some advice on what you can improve.
I'll rate the song out of 10 and I'm going to be completely honest. No bullshitting or anything like that. However, I will not be rude about it at all. I'm sure a lot of you guys on here who make music would appreciate an honest opinion so that's why I'm doing this.
Post your best song below!:)
I'll rate the song out of 10 and I'm going to be completely honest. No bullshitting or anything like that. However, I will not be rude about it at all. I'm sure a lot of you guys on here who make music would appreciate an honest opinion so that's why I'm doing this.
Post your best song below!:)
- AlwaysRawRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 0:57
http://tiny.cc/6l3cqw
- JeetRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 1:00
What makes you think your opinion has any worth when you don't even like good kid maad city?
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 1:04
Jeet wrote:What makes you think your opinion has any worth when you don't even like good kid maad city?
Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 1:04
Buddie wrote:Don't care for this at all.
Hurr durr, had to be the first to do this.
- Perfect StrangerRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 1:05
Well, I've been detracted a lot today, so another won't make a difference, but this is a recent track of mine.
- hupsunRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 1:13
Buddie's opinions tbh
- JeetRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 1:15
lol'd hardBottom Bitch wrote: Buddie's opinions tbh
- BuddieRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 2:24
Jeet wrote:What makes you think your opinion has any worth when you don't even like good kid maad city?
I don't like Kendrick's music. That doesn't mean I don't think he's a dope rapper.
For example, I think Canibus is in the Top 20 greatest rappers of all time, but I don't like his music at all.
There is a HUGE difference between the two. And not everybody likes Kendrick's music. It's not for everyone and you should respect other people's opinions.
Also, why do you always show aggression towards me? I've never done anything to you. You may not agree with me, but doesn't mean you need to be rude about things.
- AlwaysRawRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 2:30
I don't think Buddies been mean once in his life. One day he's gonna snap on one of you guys, I'm just waitingBuddie wrote:Jeet wrote:What makes you think your opinion has any worth when you don't even like good kid maad city?
I don't like Kendrick's music. That doesn't mean I don't think he's a dope rapper.
For example, I think Canibus is in the Top 20 greatest rappers of all time, but I don't like his music at all.
There is a HUGE difference between the two. And not everybody likes Kendrick's music. It's not for everyone and you should respect other people's opinions.
- BuddieRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 2:33
AlwaysRaw wrote:I don't think Buddies been mean once in his life. One day he's gonna snap on one of you guys, I'm just waitingBuddie wrote:Jeet wrote:What makes you think your opinion has any worth when you don't even like good kid maad city?
I don't like Kendrick's music. That doesn't mean I don't think he's a dope rapper.
For example, I think Canibus is in the Top 20 greatest rappers of all time, but I don't like his music at all.
There is a HUGE difference between the two. And not everybody likes Kendrick's music. It's not for everyone and you should respect other people's opinions.
Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 9:28
Depending on the style you like. but I'm guessing darker cause of your Jokerr pics so probably the eighth song here:
http://newlifemusicgroup.bandcamp.com/album/a-new-beginning
If not dark ones, then the first song.
http://newlifemusicgroup.bandcamp.com/album/a-new-beginning
If not dark ones, then the first song.
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 18:40
Jeet wrote:lol'd hardBottom Bitch wrote: Buddie's opinions tbh
- EssenceRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 18:41
I'll give you some music when detox comes out. Lately, I've been on massive writers block.
- KingRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Fri 4 Jan 2013 - 22:31
1) Buddie makes a useful thread offering feedback to others.
2) People say his opinions are invalid because of his personal taste in music, disregarding his recognition for talent as if it were the same thing.
2) People say his opinions are invalid because of his personal taste in music, disregarding his recognition for talent as if it were the same thing.
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Sat 5 Jan 2013 - 18:21
THE ONE PERSON TO SUBMIT and doesn't get reviewed by BuddiePerfect Stranger wrote:Well, I've been detracted a lot today, so another won't make a difference, but this is a recent track of mine.
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Mon 7 Jan 2013 - 11:07
AlwaysRaw wrote:THE ONE PERSON TO SUBMIT and doesn't get reviewed by BuddiePerfect Stranger wrote:Well, I've been detracted a lot today, so another won't make a difference, but this is a recent track of mine.
Yeah, what he said.
Wut u mn da 1 pearson tah submut m8?
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Tue 8 Jan 2013 - 3:16
I mean you're the only one who put in a vid for Buddie to review or whatever.Perfect Stranger wrote:AlwaysRaw wrote:THE ONE PERSON TO SUBMIT and doesn't get reviewed by BuddiePerfect Stranger wrote:Well, I've been detracted a lot today, so another won't make a difference, but this is a recent track of mine.
Yeah, what he said.
Wut u mn da 1 pearson tah submut m8?
Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Tue 8 Jan 2013 - 23:34
Buddie's still an OG
- BuddieRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Tue 8 Jan 2013 - 23:47
King wrote:1) Buddie makes a useful thread offering feedback to others.
2) People say his opinions are invalid because of his personal taste in music, disregarding his recognition for talent as if it were the same thing.
Haters gon' hate
- BuddieRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Tue 8 Jan 2013 - 23:55
AlwaysRaw wrote:I mean you're the only one who put in a vid for Buddie to review or whatever.Perfect Stranger wrote:AlwaysRaw wrote:THE ONE PERSON TO SUBMIT and doesn't get reviewed by BuddiePerfect Stranger wrote:Well, I've been detracted a lot today, so another won't make a difference, but this is a recent track of mine.
Yeah, what he said.
Wut u mn da 1 pearson tah submut m8?
Sorry man! I didn't see this until now for some reason lol
You need A LOT more practice pal! I would really focus on improving your flow. It's hard to really judge you and your music from a minute and half video. But from that verse alone, it wasn't very good man. I'm just being honest.
Rapping takes years and years to truly perfect your craft, but if you're willing to put in the work then who knows, you could improve and become a good rapper. Your also young, so there's a lot of time for improvement.
Rating: 3/10
- Perfect StrangerRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Wed 9 Jan 2013 - 6:16
Buddie wrote:AlwaysRaw wrote:I mean you're the only one who put in a vid for Buddie to review or whatever.Perfect Stranger wrote:AlwaysRaw wrote:THE ONE PERSON TO SUBMIT and doesn't get reviewed by BuddiePerfect Stranger wrote:Well, I've been detracted a lot today, so another won't make a difference, but this is a recent track of mine.
Yeah, what he said.
Wut u mn da 1 pearson tah submut m8?
Sorry man! I didn't see this until now for some reason lol
You need A LOT more practice pal! I would really focus on improving your flow. It's hard to really judge you and your music from a minute and half video. But from that verse alone, it wasn't very good man. I'm just being honest.
Rapping takes years and years to truly perfect your craft, but if you're willing to put in the work then who knows, you could improve and become a good rapper. Your also young, so there's a lot of time for improvement.
Rating: 3/10
First off, thank you for you honesty!
Although, I think you were being a little harsh - as I thought my lyrics were decent - but I agree with your points on my flow.
This is something I'm trying my hardest to fix up.
This was written very quickly and memorised very quickly.
If you compare my lyricism two years ago too now, you'd be suprised, but hopefully my flow will prosper in the future.
Cheers.
Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Wed 9 Jan 2013 - 20:15
I posted a link for him to check out
- AlwaysRawRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Wed 9 Jan 2013 - 23:04
Wow. Way to take it like a champ man. I feel like Buddie on this but it's because I'm not used to an accentPerfect Stranger wrote:Buddie wrote:AlwaysRaw wrote:I mean you're the only one who put in a vid for Buddie to review or whatever.Perfect Stranger wrote:AlwaysRaw wrote:THE ONE PERSON TO SUBMIT and doesn't get reviewed by BuddiePerfect Stranger wrote:Well, I've been detracted a lot today, so another won't make a difference, but this is a recent track of mine.
Yeah, what he said.
Wut u mn da 1 pearson tah submut m8?
Sorry man! I didn't see this until now for some reason lol
You need A LOT more practice pal! I would really focus on improving your flow. It's hard to really judge you and your music from a minute and half video. But from that verse alone, it wasn't very good man. I'm just being honest.
Rapping takes years and years to truly perfect your craft, but if you're willing to put in the work then who knows, you could improve and become a good rapper. Your also young, so there's a lot of time for improvement.
Rating: 3/10
First off, thank you for you honesty!
Although, I think you were being a little harsh - as I thought my lyrics were decent - but I agree with your points on my flow.
This is something I'm trying my hardest to fix up.
This was written very quickly and memorised very quickly.
If you compare my lyricism two years ago too now, you'd be suprised, but hopefully my flow will prosper in the future.
Cheers.
- BuddieRegistered Member
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Re: Show Me Your Music! (I'll give you my honest opinion!)
Wed 9 Jan 2013 - 23:56
Reidy wrote:I posted a link for him to check out
Sorry about that! haha
I listened to 3 of your songs from your album/mixtape and your music has a pretty solid sound to it. I think you should definitely concentrate on improving your flow and delivery. I'd also work on stretching words and making them fit right so that it doesn't sound forced. I heard a few lines from your songs that just seemed forced to me. I also think that you could improve on your choruses/hooks a bit more. They weren't bad, but they could be a lot better. I think if you clean up those things and just keep improving then you could be a good rapper. When I clicked the link to your music, I wasn't expecting much. But it was a lot better than I thought it would be man. Just keep working at it!
Rating: 6/10
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