- dukeblueRegistered Member
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Join Date : 2012-02-27
Location : Illinois
The Last Day of Summer
Thu 22 Aug 2013 - 0:36
Well, classes start tomorrow for me and I came up with this. So I thought I would share it with you guys! As always any and all feedback is appreciated. Thanks for checking it out!
- ChokeyRegistered Member
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Join Date : 2011-10-19
Location : King Dame's Throne
Re: The Last Day of Summer
Thu 22 Aug 2013 - 0:41
production is dope as fuck.
flow is great and fits all the way through
chorus is great but gets a little annoying in the end
lyrics are good. got the best out of the subject imo. cant compare you to nas or any lyricalgod but you were good.
id wish your voice was a little louder the beat is way louder than you. and it makes you miss some words that are not said that well.
but hell I really bump this shit. gonna download it mate.
flow is great and fits all the way through
chorus is great but gets a little annoying in the end
lyrics are good. got the best out of the subject imo. cant compare you to nas or any lyricalgod but you were good.
id wish your voice was a little louder the beat is way louder than you. and it makes you miss some words that are not said that well.
but hell I really bump this shit. gonna download it mate.
- dukeblueRegistered Member
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Join Date : 2012-02-27
Location : Illinois
Re: The Last Day of Summer
Thu 22 Aug 2013 - 0:46
Thanks man! Glad to hear you liked it, I agree with the volume issues though. I had the song done but there was a clip in it I wanted to get rid of, and ended up forgetting to readjust the gain correctly again. I forgot about that until you mentioned it. I'll probably fix it and have the new one in the download link in a half hour or so.Chokey wrote:production is dope as fuck.
flow is great and fits all the way through
chorus is great but gets a little annoying in the end
lyrics are good. got the best out of the subject imo. cant compare you to nas or any lyricalgod but you were good.
id wish your voice was a little louder the beat is way louder than you. and it makes you miss some words that are not said that well.
but hell I really bump this shit. gonna download it mate.
Edit: New download with correct gain is in the description now.
- hupsunRegistered Member
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Join Date : 2011-08-29
Re: The Last Day of Summer
Thu 22 Aug 2013 - 1:48
THIS MY FUVKING JAM #!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- dukeblueRegistered Member
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Join Date : 2012-02-27
Location : Illinois
Re: The Last Day of Summer
Fri 23 Aug 2013 - 2:17
You can't imagine how much this means to me.Bottom Bitch wrote:THIS MY FUVKING JAM #!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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