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MCJayFree
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Mon 19 Dec 2011 - 7:05
Hey guys this is my debut video on youtube. Please check it out and tell me what you think.

1st mixtape drops on my birthday, Jan 1st, "When my balls drop" any and all feedback is cool




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Mon 19 Dec 2011 - 13:30
its alrite, you need alot of work on your flow and lyrics.

good luck.
MCJayFree
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Mon 19 Dec 2011 - 15:30
i agree, and thanks. any and all feedback is helpful..

turn it up!
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Mon 19 Dec 2011 - 15:43
Needs more emotion and you need to practice riding the beat. Maybe try rapping with a metronome in your headphones. Keep working towards it.
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Mon 19 Dec 2011 - 16:18
Yeah you got a lot of work to do man...You sound like your bored rapping..
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Mon 19 Dec 2011 - 16:20
GangusKahn wrote:Yeah you got a lot of work to do man...You sound like your bored rapping..

And if you're bored, we're bored. You gotta go crazy on the beat son!
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Mon 19 Dec 2011 - 20:05
yeah i mean i get hifey and shit when i freestyle. but thsi song i admit i was more calm than usual. its my first youtube video and song i released for a mixtape. but i will keep it all in mind, keep the feedback coming it really does help.

hopsin is one of my biggest influences in recent memory, so hearing from his fans is pretty dope

(:
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Mon 19 Dec 2011 - 20:29
whack city chicks, whack whack city chicks
bitches get trashed then they act like some idiots


thats my remix.
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Mon 19 Dec 2011 - 20:34
lolol. i think the song is rubbish, but the beat is fire and catchy as fuck.

u shuld make the remix max
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Mon 19 Dec 2011 - 20:42
MCJayFree wrote:lolol. i think the song is rubbish, but the beat is fire and catchy as fuck.

u shuld make the remix max

Oh yeah, the beat is swagged out. I was actually gonna do a remix and it was gonna be about suburban chicks that act hood "whack city chicks, whack whack city chicks" lol
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