Text Battles - Call somebody out

some good battles.

RapLord81 wrote:maximus - you are crazy with the syllables and wordplay and just damn, I had fun reading that. Keep doin ya thing.

thank you sir.

Haven't been on cause my computer fucks a lot and still does - im on my moms ATM. So I'm going against anyone and every one!:


Stop that fist in your throat before you say som'n stupid
You steal all your punchlines by searching on google like a lil kid
All them yo' mamas disses were enough long before you stopped
The same bad line after line do you know how bad it sucked?
The first two or three were okay but after it just got sad
For every bad joke you made I ate a cake I started with bulimi now im fat
aint saying you can't do better you just haven't tried
If I were you and I've seen the lines I've send shit I had cried
I know you can do better heres a little inspiration
I'll give you something you can use I even give you a demonstration
I've stopped with the mama-jokes shit i aint got anything
What shall I do my rhymes sucks, my flow blows and I cant sing

Fail

GangusKahn wrote:Fail

Well it's hard dissin everyone but IMO it's pretty good. Hope others will tell their honest opinion too.

Chokey wrote:

GangusKahn wrote:Fail

Well it's hard dissin everyone but IMO it's pretty good. Hope others will tell their honest opinion too.

Wasn't talkin about ur post bud

GangusKahn wrote:

Chokey wrote:

GangusKahn wrote:Fail

Well it's hard dissin everyone but IMO it's pretty good. Hope others will tell their honest opinion too.

Wasn't talkin about ur post bud

Then what did you talk bout?

Fuck you Mr. Choke, you can get ya sister poked
I got an object imah use to stick her throat
And I'll insert it until it explodes and the bitch'll moan
I be sellin mad rocks and you just skippin stones
But seriously you rap whack and you can get ya cap papped
I'll shoot ya pussy ass and you can take a cat nap.... and that's that

RapLord81 wrote:Fuck you Mr. Choke, you can get ya sister poked
I got an object imah use to stick her throat
And I'll insert it until it explodes and the bitch'll moan
I be sellin mad rocks and you just skippin stones
But seriously you rap whack and you can get ya cap papped
I'll shoot ya pussy ass and you can take a cat nap.... and that's that

Wow really creative lines used a thousind times
And half of the shit doesn't even rhymes
You kinda aggresive and mad
I think deeply down your heart your sad
I can be the man in your life
I can be your husband if you be my wife
Then I'll do the things you always wanted it to be
Romantic dinner, red roses & a big diamond ring all for free
the perfect girl dream, believe me sweety i'll make ya scream
I can kiss you on your back
as long as you dont say my raps are wack
I can stick my toungue in your throat
as long as you swallow my load
I can lick your dirty little butthole
As long as you stop rapping and leaves it to the pro's you faggot
Eat a dick but not mine
I know your hungry so I'll let you find somebody cause this is the last rhyme


wtf was this

lmao chokey, you need to add a "no homo" at the end of that one hahaha

Chokey wrote:

RapLord81 wrote:Fuck you Mr. Choke, you can get ya sister poked
I got an object imah use to stick her throat
And I'll insert it until it explodes and the bitch'll moan
I be sellin mad rocks and you just skippin stones
But seriously you rap whack and you can get ya cap papped
I'll shoot ya pussy ass and you can take a cat nap.... and that's that

Wow really creative lines used a thousind times
And half of the shit doesn't even rhymes
You kinda aggresive and mad
I think deeply down your heart your sad
I can be the man in your life
I can be your husband if you be my wife
Then I'll do the things you always wanted it to be
Romantic dinner, red roses & a big diamond ring all for free
the perfect girl dream, believe me sweety i'll make ya scream
I can kiss you on your back
as long as you dont say my raps are wack
I can stick my toungue in your throat
as long as you swallow my load
I can lick your dirty little butthole
As long as you stop rapping and leaves it to the pro's you faggot
Eat a dick but not mine
I know your hungry so I'll let you find somebody cause this is the last rhyme


wtf was this

Holy shit...I feel gay even quoting this...wtf!!!!!! Epic...Can you imagine this happening in real life HAHAHHAHA

GangusKahn wrote:

Chokey wrote:

RapLord81 wrote:Fuck you Mr. Choke, you can get ya sister poked
I got an object imah use to stick her throat
And I'll insert it until it explodes and the bitch'll moan
I be sellin mad rocks and you just skippin stones
But seriously you rap whack and you can get ya cap papped
I'll shoot ya pussy ass and you can take a cat nap.... and that's that

Wow really creative lines used a thousind times
And half of the shit doesn't even rhymes
You kinda aggresive and mad
I think deeply down your heart your sad
I can be the man in your life
I can be your husband if you be my wife
Then I'll do the things you always wanted it to be
Romantic dinner, red roses & a big diamond ring all for free
the perfect girl dream, believe me sweety i'll make ya scream
I can kiss you on your back
as long as you dont say my raps are wack
I can stick my toungue in your throat
as long as you swallow my load
I can lick your dirty little butthole
As long as you stop rapping and leaves it to the pro's you faggot
Eat a dick but not mine
I know your hungry so I'll let you find somebody cause this is the last rhyme


wtf was this

Holy shit...I feel gay even quoting this...wtf!!!!!! Epic...Can you imagine this happening in real life HAHAHHAHA

Just imagine somebody busting out with this verse at a Grind Time event...... hahahahahahahahaha fuck that shit is funny

Chokey wrote:

RapLord81 wrote:Fuck you Mr. Choke, you can get ya sister poked
I got an object imah use to stick her throat
And I'll insert it until it explodes and the bitch'll moan
I be sellin mad rocks and you just skippin stones
But seriously you rap whack and you can get ya cap papped
I'll shoot ya pussy ass and you can take a cat nap.... and that's that

Wow really creative lines used a thousind times
And half of the shit doesn't even rhymes
You kinda aggresive and mad
I think deeply down your heart your sad
I can be the man in your life
I can be your husband if you be my wife
Then I'll do the things you always wanted it to be
Romantic dinner, red roses & a big diamond ring all for free
the perfect girl dream, believe me sweety i'll make ya scream
I can kiss you on your back
as long as you dont say my raps are wack
I can stick my toungue in your throat
as long as you swallow my load
I can lick your dirty little butthole
As long as you stop rapping and leaves it to the pro's you faggot
Eat a dick but not mine
I know your hungry so I'll let you find somebody cause this is the last rhyme


wtf was this

This comes off as tacky, and unsophisticated, and it's just not G.

Sure needed a no-homo. I was like wtf did I just do after I wrote it.

You should make a youtube troll video with that. Spit that verse live on cam and do it like you are serious and as if you think the lines are mind-blowing. Would be hilarious to read the comments you'd get.

41OMaXiMuS wrote:You should make a youtube troll video with that. Spit that verse live on cam and do it like you are serious and as if you think the lines are mind-blowing. Would be hilarious to read the comments you'd get.

I'll do it when my real computer comes back. Im on my moms tiny laptop and the webcam blows so much that you wouldn't even be able to see it's me.

he already has a video dissin me :P

I do a lot a gangrape mostly 5 vs 1
Not even talking bout Maximus mom we do just for fun
But my dick got 5 on it

Chokey wrote:I do a lot a gangrape mostly 5 vs 1
Not even talking bout Maximus mom we do just for fun
But my dick got 5 on it

that was ... excellent.

STRANGEgenius wrote:

Chokey wrote:I do a lot a gangrape mostly 5 vs 1
Not even talking bout Maximus mom we do just for fun
But my dick got 5 on it

that was ... excellent.

Im sorry did anybody call you out?
Oh yeah the whole thread but this time it wasn't your name that I shout'd
Everybody fucking hates you because your annoying repleys
A thumb up, yes or no to every question and describing evrything as 'good' and 'nice'
Your longest post were when you should write how many dicks your sista had sucked
But then you got the "syntex error" that pop'd up

Chokey wrote:

STRANGEgenius wrote:

Chokey wrote:I do a lot a gangrape mostly 5 vs 1
Not even talking bout Maximus mom we do just for fun
But my dick got 5 on it

that was ... excellent.

Im sorry did anybody call you out?
Oh yeah the whole thread but this time it wasn't your name that I shout'd
Everybody fucking hates you because your annoying repleys
A thumb up, yes or no to every question and describing evrything as 'good' and 'nice'
Your longest post were when you should write how many dicks your sista had sucked
But then you got the "syntex error" that pop'd up

lol. That last 2 lines dont make sense

STRANGEgenius wrote:

Chokey wrote:

STRANGEgenius wrote:

Chokey wrote:I do a lot a gangrape mostly 5 vs 1
Not even talking bout Maximus mom we do just for fun
But my dick got 5 on it

that was ... excellent.

Im sorry did anybody call you out?
Oh yeah the whole thread but this time it wasn't your name that I shout'd
Everybody fucking hates you because your annoying repleys
A thumb up, yes or no to every question and describing evrything as 'good' and 'nice'
Your longest post were when you should write how many dicks your sista had sucked
But then you got the "syntex error" that pop'd up

lol. That last 2 lines dont make sense

Its my birthday, im wasted as fuck and have slept like 3 hours the last 50 hours or something like that. Please be nice... I'll go to bed -.-

Chokey wrote:

STRANGEgenius wrote:

Chokey wrote:

STRANGEgenius wrote:

Chokey wrote:I do a lot a gangrape mostly 5 vs 1
Not even talking bout Maximus mom we do just for fun
But my dick got 5 on it

that was ... excellent.

Im sorry did anybody call you out?
Oh yeah the whole thread but this time it wasn't your name that I shout'd
Everybody fucking hates you because your annoying repleys
A thumb up, yes or no to every question and describing evrything as 'good' and 'nice'
Your longest post were when you should write how many dicks your sista had sucked
But then you got the "syntex error" that pop'd up

lol. That last 2 lines dont make sense

Its my birthday, im wasted as fuck and have slept like 3 hours the last 50 hours or something like that. Please be nice... I'll go to bed -.-

suck my dick first.

STRANGEgenius wrote:

Chokey wrote:

STRANGEgenius wrote:

Chokey wrote:

STRANGEgenius wrote:

Chokey wrote:I do a lot a gangrape mostly 5 vs 1
Not even talking bout Maximus mom we do just for fun
But my dick got 5 on it

that was ... excellent.

Im sorry did anybody call you out?
Oh yeah the whole thread but this time it wasn't your name that I shout'd
Everybody fucking hates you because your annoying repleys
A thumb up, yes or no to every question and describing evrything as 'good' and 'nice'
Your longest post were when you should write how many dicks your sista had sucked
But then you got the "syntex error" that pop'd up

lol. That last 2 lines dont make sense

Its my birthday, im wasted as fuck and have slept like 3 hours the last 50 hours or something like that. Please be nice... I'll go to bed -.-

suck my dick first.

Haha you fucker this accuetly made me laugh.
What I ment were that your posts always are 2-3 words and your sister had sucked so many dicks that the page couldn't count them all (syntex error). It makes sense... right?

Chokey wrote:

STRANGEgenius wrote:

Chokey wrote:

STRANGEgenius wrote:

Chokey wrote:

STRANGEgenius wrote:

Chokey wrote:I do a lot a gangrape mostly 5 vs 1
Not even talking bout Maximus mom we do just for fun
But my dick got 5 on it

that was ... excellent.

Im sorry did anybody call you out?
Oh yeah the whole thread but this time it wasn't your name that I shout'd
Everybody fucking hates you because your annoying repleys
A thumb up, yes or no to every question and describing evrything as 'good' and 'nice'
Your longest post were when you should write how many dicks your sista had sucked
But then you got the "syntex error" that pop'd up

lol. That last 2 lines dont make sense

Its my birthday, im wasted as fuck and have slept like 3 hours the last 50 hours or something like that. Please be nice... I'll go to bed -.-

suck my dick first.

Haha you fucker this accuetly made me laugh.
What I ment were that your posts always are 2-3 words and your sister had sucked so many dicks that the page couldn't count them all (syntex error). It makes sense... right?

sure if your retarded