My new song "A.D.H.D" - Vijilantee

Hey guys,
Check out my new song off my upcoming mixtape, "DancingOnYourWindpipe", this is a promo track.
I edited and filmed the video myself so I apologize in advance.

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Well, I can say you've improved a lot compared to other stuff I've heard. Most notably your voice sounds a lot better now, not near as forced. The flow was pretty awkward at times though. I'm not listening to it right now but an example would be the part about wishing you could play basketball. If I remember correctly that part just sounded, real off. Also, the video as you mentioned in your post was pretty lackluster. But hell, it's better than nothing. At the end of the day though, the song is not that good(just my opinion). But you're 13 and you've got all the time in the world to improve. Just keep working at it.

As I've said this was recorded a few months ago but then again I'm not here to make excuses I was just anxious to release it and I've got some good feedback so far.
I'm 14 now btw.

Perfect Stranger wrote:As I've said this was recorded a few months ago but then again I'm not here to make excuses I was just anxious to release it and I've got some good feedback so far.
I'm 14 now btw.

I didn't mean to come off negatively. Was just trying to give you feedback man. Like I said it was an improvement. Just don't like the song personally. I have no real qualms with it other than the flow being off a few times. And my bad on the age, was just going by what you said in the title.

dukeblue wrote:

Perfect Stranger wrote:As I've said this was recorded a few months ago but then again I'm not here to make excuses I was just anxious to release it and I've got some good feedback so far.
I'm 14 now btw.

I didn't mean to come off negatively. Was just trying to give you feedback man. Like I said it was an improvement. Just don't like the song personally. I have no real qualms with it other than the flow being off a few times. And my bad on the age, was just going by what you said in the title.

My apologies if I sounded rude or anything, I do appreciate your feedback bruh.
Fair enough, I'll take note of being more particular about my flow in future.
Also, no dramas it was my birthday like the next day after I uploaded it so I could hardly blame you haha