I Want It Remix

Been awhile since i've posted anything so this is a little song i dropped a verse on for my bro Eedee

https://soundcloud.com/eedeemusic/i-want-it-remix-ft-mr-dgaf

I would like to contribute some constructive criticism if You don't mind (if You do tell me I won't anymore :))

The track starts really cool but when the old school keyboard kicks in at 1.13 everything starts to fall apart imho, do You really think it's neccesary? It starts seriously interferring with the piano and basically with everything. Imo if You got rid of it that would be very beneficial, besides I think the tempo of the song is a little bit too fast. Other than that it's fine.

Bladerunner wrote:I would like to contribute some constructive criticism if You don't mind (if You do tell me I won't anymore :))

The track starts really cool but when the old school keyboard kicks in at 1.13 everything starts to fall apart imho, do You really think it's neccesary? It starts seriously interferring with the piano and basically with everything. Imo if You got rid of it that would be very beneficial, besides I think the tempo of the song is a little bit too fast. Other than that it's fine.

thanks bro, this isn't actually my song though I'm just posting it on behalf of the bro Eedee and cus I'm on the last verse lol. He did the production for this track, it was a remix to a song off his first album. I will pass on that feedback to him though, thank you :)

Yo! im not going to lie.... I was not liking the first two rappers.....I was going to x out of the tab but then you did your thing and i was impressed! Good stuff man!

iamraw24 wrote:Yo! im not going to lie.... I was not liking the first two rappers.....I was going to x out of the tab but then you did your thing and i was impressed! Good stuff man!

thanks for sticking it out til the end bro, glad you liked my verse atleast :)

I haven't posted on here in quite a bit but damn Dilz gets better every time I hear him spit. Pumped to have a track coming out with you in the near future.

^^^I thawt u guize ddint lyke ech otha?

Perfect Stranger wrote:^^^I thawt u guize ddint lyke ech otha?

we are cool!

I say it in jest, hell I’m a registered democrat!

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JohnnyRottenSeed wrote:I say it in jest, hell I’m a registered democrat!

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I don't even understand that line? lol

and me and Dcan are bros lol, he on a song on my next project