New Song In Progress, Feedback Wanted

I"ve been working on this the past two days, what do you guys think? Do you think the hook sucks or is it passable?

http://soundcloud.com/gregdesciscio/fuck-with-me-rough-draft/s-Snuin

This is good dewww, real talk, I love ur mic settings for ur dubing, and the hook sounds dope.

Constructive Criticism - Work on your deliver, seemed a little soft for that instrumental.

GangusKahn wrote:Constructive Criticism - Work on your deliver, seemed a little soft for that instrumental.

Agreed. But besides from that it was pretty dope man

First of all I love this beat (2pac & Biggie - Runnin') and I think you did it justice man. Good flow and delivery. What software do you use and what kind of mic do you have?

Thank you. I use audacity to record, then bring in my raw tracks to FL Studio for the mixing and mastering. I use the Blue Snowball mic to record.

Can only second what Gangus said bro, sounded a wee bit monotone, try switch up your flow a bit and it'll be dope!

Thanks for the advice, I appreciate everyone's feedback.