acapella

just wrote and recorded this check it out and let me know what yous think for a 30 min job?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qmIxDwFP6gw new acappela i just did bro check it out

Pretty good man, big improvement from the bully song i heard, all about dat delivery son

clicked video, saw snapbag, clicked x

Sometimes you sounds good then you sounds whack then good and whack again... you need to practice more to get more consistent... Other than you're still very young and I can see your potential just try to work to get your flow to sound more consistent. And the lyrics I didn't feel that much but then again I don't what style of rapper you aiming for so I don't know what feedback I should give you there. But as always don't try to you use rhymes you already have done. And try to use more complex words to stand out. Other than that it's not that bad for not being a professional rapper, keep it up.

Improvement man.

Chokey wrote:clicked video, saw snapbag, clicked x

cool bro nice to know i have your support.

and thanks for the feedback from everyone else.. like i said, wrote some random lyrics and recorded in bout half an hour, so its not like i put my heart and commitment into the lyrics haha, tbh i didnt know what i was on about.. just wanted to muck around for a change

vids getting a lot of dislikes though...