my lyrics

please critique mylyrics

verse 1:
yo dog
im cummin thru clean in yo girls vagina
big ass vagina
its so damn tight, its like a vagina
im the best rhyma
jus tlike yo girls has the bestest vagina

chorus:
ay ay ay ay
i aint gay
cuz i like meeennnnn
and im a chink

oh oh oh oh


verse 2:
nigga dont fuck wit me or ill beat ur ass
bitch touch my D and ill put it in ur ass
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
swagggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
on a mill
i got a friend name bill
jack and jill ohhhhh
yeah


chorus:
ay ay ay ay
i aint gay
cuz i like meeennnnn
and im a chink

oh oh oh oh

chorus:
ay ay ay ay
i aint gay
cuz i like meeennnnn
and im a chink

oh oh oh oh
chorus:
ay ay ay ay
i aint gay
cuz i like meeennnnn
and im a chink

oh oh oh oh

bridge:
reall nigguh wassup
you wanna foto dawg
you wanna know the motto dog, YOLO
SWAGYOLOOMG#RAREFV


hopsin tryna sign me to funk volume #funkvolume2007

Still better than Soulja Boy

how gay.

Dwamn, man!
That was so complex bro!
I wish I was as good a lyricist as you.

I would like to have the honor of remixing it, good sir.

Verse

Yuh, fk da haytas, dis mny go hard,
Yuh its so tiyt its givvin meh a hard,
yeen gtta nuff green,
yeen gtta nuff swg,
da mny da hoes,
opn ma daws,
opn yo drws
I iz da gr8tst raper eva,
Trie ta swg at mi, i fk yo ass yuh bruh,
skinays hmmed up rnd ma wayst, dey fel so rite,
dey so tite,
dis mney so gud,
swggn hard, lyke a shld.
Swggy!

Obvious troll.

Emblem wrote:Obvious troll.

I dont know how they arent banned already lol. #FV2007

Should have not clicked this thread and waste time to make this post.

anthonyFv wrote:

Emblem wrote:Obvious troll.

I dont know how they arent banned already lol. #FV2007

i banned him.

STRANGEgenius wrote:

anthonyFv wrote:

Emblem wrote:Obvious troll.

I dont know how they arent banned already lol. #FV2007

i banned him.

Why did you ban him? This is quality entertainment.
He rhymed vagina with vagina.... do you understand how difficult that must have been to achieve?

ImNotGay wrote:

STRANGEgenius wrote:

anthonyFv wrote:

Emblem wrote:Obvious troll.

I dont know how they arent banned already lol. #FV2007

i banned him.

Why did you ban him? This is quality entertainment.
He rhymed vagina with vagina.... do you understand how difficult that must have been to achieve?

i didn't realise he had such lyrical skill.

STRANGEgenius wrote:

ImNotGay wrote:

STRANGEgenius wrote:

anthonyFv wrote:

Emblem wrote:Obvious troll.

I dont know how they arent banned already lol. #FV2007

i banned him.

Why did you ban him? This is quality entertainment.
He rhymed vagina with vagina.... do you understand how difficult that must have been to achieve?

i didn't realise he had such lyrical skill.

Almost as good as Tech N9ne.

Emblem wrote:

STRANGEgenius wrote:

ImNotGay wrote:

STRANGEgenius wrote:

anthonyFv wrote:

Emblem wrote:Obvious troll.

I dont know how they arent banned already lol. #FV2007

i banned him.

Why did you ban him? This is quality entertainment.
He rhymed vagina with vagina.... do you understand how difficult that must have been to achieve?

i didn't realise he had such lyrical skill.

Almost as good as Tech N9ne.

D-Henry wrote:Still better than Soulja Boy

soulja boi sucksss hopitty hop dizzed him
#funkvolume1943

STRANGEgenius wrote:how gay.

i am quite happy actually

Perfect Stranger wrote:Dwamn, man!
That was so complex bro!
I wish I was as good a lyricist as you.

I would like to have the honor of remixing it, good sir.

Verse

Yuh, fk da haytas, dis mny go hard,
Yuh its so tiyt its givvin meh a hard,
yeen gtta nuff green,
yeen gtta nuff swg,
da mny da hoes,
opn ma daws,
opn yo drws
I iz da gr8tst raper eva,
Trie ta swg at mi, i fk yo ass yuh bruh,
skinays hmmed up rnd ma wayst, dey fel so rite,
dey so tite,
dis mney so gud,
swggn hard, lyke a shld.
Swggy!

damn that was niceeeeeee ya when i gett a mictophawn imma make a beet and record dis n u can get dat feature

Emblem wrote:Obvious troll.

no i live on top of a bridge actully

anthonyFv wrote:

Emblem wrote:Obvious troll.

I dont know how they arent banned already lol. #FV2007

I AINT BANNED DOE I AIT EVEN

King wrote:Should have not clicked this thread and waste time to make this post.

well u did

h0psinissoh4wtFV2010bro wrote:

Emblem wrote:Obvious troll.

no i live on top of a bridge actully

Win! Ohh wait you lose cause your banned.