First verse

Have you ever just stared into the sky
Wondering what was up there and always asked why
why everything around you was turned to shit
then you realize that you're the only one in control of it
Head so high and lost in the clouds
Always lost and never found
Trying to make everyone around you proud
But I'm not going to give in to this worthless place
Not going to rely on some fucking faith
I'm my own man and that will always be true
Everyone around me wondering what the fuck I will do
But listen to my words and they'll soon sink in
Until they're embedded in your soul deep within
My words will hit hard and make you cry
It's just another storm that will soon pass by
don't rely on others to help you out
don't get on your knees and give God a shout
all you need is yourself, and that's what you were given
If it makes you feel better, then yes, you are forgiven
I don't look up to heaven and wonder why God wasn't here for me
cus' I knew that I was the one who was in charge of my journey
I'm on my own, and that's the way I want it to be
Everyone around me is blind; but I can truly see

Not bad bro for your first verse :)

Better than most people when they make there first verse. Keep It up

fa sho that was good. i don't agree with it lol but shit was good.